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Dear Advisory Panel members: In the attached corrected comment, two
typographic errors omit the quantitative comparison of observed and
predicted 2004–2009 average statewide refinery emission intensity
that is reported in the attachments cited as references 5 and 6 to
the comment from the comment itself. A sentence on page one is
corrected to read: Differences in refinery crude feed density and
sulfur content explain 90–96% of differences in CO2 emission
intensity observed across U.S. and California refineries and
predict average 2004-2009 statewide refinery emissions within 1%
(5, 6). A sentence on page 2 is corrected to read: Observed
statewide emissions are within the 95% confidence of prediction in
four of six years (Table 1) and are within 1% of the prediction as
a six-year average (6).  These typos are corrected in the attached
resubmitted comment. Apologies for any inconvenience.  Greg Karras,
Senior Scientist, CBE